the beginning heavy noise at 0:20 had a ton of impact on the melody early on and thats excellent, it gave it this certaint atmosphere but i feel like between that noise and the time to drums kick in there should be a little gap so you could maby put in a slight raiser inbetween or something to make it flow slightly better, drums are really crisp no audo fuzzyness at all, great piece man, keep it up, oh and sry it took so long to review this, im currently doing my service time so i dont have much free time, experiment with different styles and melodies, good stuff.
- Pandasticality