good start, i like that simple synth, snares are spot on super crisp but the kicks feel like they lack a little bit of impact, other than that the melody is really nice, the synth could be turned up a little, i love that sound at 1:35 onwards, that synth, so nice :0 really nice song sir, keep it up and keep trying different melodies, this is really good stuff.
p.s. sry it took so long, im currently serving my civil service by studying law, haven't had much free time.
- Pandasticality